Thursday 16 April 2020

Pobble writing

On the prowl
This is my pobble today! Today I was writing about a tiger trying to find some food


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  1. Sharon Gibson19 April 2020 at 13:43

    Hi Grace,
    I really like how you have written this in the first person (where you have made yourself the tiger), and that you are paragraphing. Your next step will be when you have different speakers, remember they get their own paragraph.
    Mrs Gibson

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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